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Hurtling through time and space,
                                                     Can he ever find a place?
                                             Jumping forward to a brand new earth,
                                                Jumping back to an empty hearth.
                                             Forward again to see the Face of Boe,
                                                 Back in time to meet an old foe.
                                               He is pursued by an incessant fact,
                                              The likes of which he can't take back.
                                               His entire home, his people his soul,
                                               All gone, leaving him without a goal.
                                                   The last of the Time Wars,
                                                        The end of his kind,
                                                   He is trapped by those bars,
                                                  But what is he seeking to find?
                                                   Solace he finds within one girl,
                                                 The likes of whoms story unfurls.
                                           Constant companions, best friends, equals,
                                              Even through their occasional squalls.
                                                   It is she for whom he sought,
                                                And for she for whom he fought.
                                                The man of whom I speak is he,
                                                     The last of the Time Lords,
                                                                The Doctor
Well, I don't know. I was feeling emo today and I am watching the Doctor Who Confidential so, I figured, why not?
I'm not a great shakes at poetry and well yeah.
edit: i know the forat is odd but they didn't provide a center option.
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:iconkrazykitkatlaugh:
krazykitkatlaugh Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, this is fantastic! I love this type of thing, and so many feelings!!! Lol write more!!
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6148 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful
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Amazing-person-yes Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It just says she alot but it doesn't mention who she is.
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013   Writer
I think it's supposed to be rose. I haven't looked at this thing in years.
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Amazing-person-yes Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
She?
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013   Writer
She what?
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:iconan-autheress-unknown:
I Love this, I am a Doctor Who fanatic
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013   Writer
Coolio
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rodneyskinnerfan Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
Don't say that you are not good at poetry because you are! This pome was brilliant!
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012   Writer
I'll take your word for it xp
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:iconrodneyskinnerfan:
rodneyskinnerfan Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012
You should! It was beautiful
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Nicvah Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011
This is very moving. :)
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011   Writer
thanks for the fave.
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:iconnicvah:
Nicvah Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011
You're quite welcome! Fantastic work.
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:iconjazzthesoldierboi:
jazzthesoldierboi Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010
kinda looks like an hour glass.
did u do that intentionally?
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010   Writer
I was barely thinking about it when I was writing it. It was years ago I wasn't thinking much at all.
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:iconroselovesthedoctor:
RoseLovesTheDoctor Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this makes me smile. :)
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010   Writer
As you like.
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darkpopcornangel22 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2010
l luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv it^_^
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010   Writer
Um, thanks.
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darkpopcornangel22 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010
ur weeeeeeeeeeeeeeelcome^_____^
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:iconilssii-koschei:
Ilssii-Koschei Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2010
*sobs loudly*

Don't go Doctor! we miss you...*trails off into quiet crying*
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hisdarkdesire Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
Oh my heavens. After reading this I was left with such a sombre state of mind! This is very good. I loved the line "And for she for whom he fought" so very special Thank you for writing this.
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009   Writer
Um, no problem I guess. Well, I guess if one person can find that, it's not worthless.
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roninvalkyrie Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2009
It captures the loneliness and pain that The Doctor suffers from being the last of his kind very well.
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2009   Writer
Um...it does?
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:iconroninvalkyrie:
roninvalkyrie Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2009
A lot of lines concern him wandering and dwelling with his decision to save the universe over saving his own kind.

The poem also conveys the sense of adventure the series has, but that fact that The Doctor was the last of his kind was always a fact that lay like a shadow in the background.
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2009   Writer
Um, ok. My thing is, I really don't think this is that good of a poem. It was written in the heat of fandom. But people liked it so I never really got rid of it. Its just that I feel I have so much else to offer in many other areas. Why does this thing get so much press?
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:iconroninvalkyrie:
roninvalkyrie Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2009
It's Doctor Who. Everybody loves him.
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2009   Writer
I'm not saying that's not the case, he is a little on the amazing side. It's just that this, and Torchwood, are the only two things that I ever get faved. It frustrates me.
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roninvalkyrie Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2009
That's understandable.
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:icondoctorwhorulesmysoul:
omg i'm such a fan of doctor who, it rules my life. i really love this poem, it just sums everything up about the doctor. david tennant is my future husband! (well, i can dream)
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2008   Writer
Well, I would have to agree a little bit. Thanks for the fave by the way.
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:icondoctorwhorulesmysoul:
sorry, i'm new to this. wat i meant wuz that i had favourited heaps of OTHER peoples work! i get it now... im a bit slow with dw messing with my brain and all...
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:iconriri-lala-kiki:
Riri-Lala-Kiki Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2008
cool! I like it. You're better at poetry than I am.
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2008   Writer
Really? Oh don't be hard on yourself.
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:iconriri-lala-kiki:
Riri-Lala-Kiki Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2008
Yeah, I know... but I'm still not a very good poet. Stories, sure! Poetry? Not so much...
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2008   Writer
Yeah, I used to say that...and its true. My stories kick ass while my poems are just my surrealist ramblings.
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:iconriri-lala-kiki:
Riri-Lala-Kiki Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2008
:) Well, I can't wait to read some of your stories, then!
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2008   Writer
Hehe. Thanks. I think I'm going to post something soon...ish (don't quote me on that.)
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:iconriri-lala-kiki:
Riri-Lala-Kiki Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2008
lol, okay, I won't.
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sawareham Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2008
A Doctor poem :) the first one I've come across. I quite like it.
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2008   Writer
Really, the first. Huh. Well thank you for the comment.
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:iconbeastinmyownstory:
Beastinmyownstory Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2008
Omg it spoke to me. Its all true about the doctor. Love it!
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2008   Writer
Seriously?
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:iconbeastinmyownstory:
Beastinmyownstory Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2008
yea
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MegamanNeos Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2008
Very good!
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2008   Writer
Thanks.
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:iconsupersonicartdrawer:
supersonicartdrawer Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2008
how do u type stories for DA?
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:iconaxelofreaht:
AxelofReaht Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2008   Writer
Um, submit a deviation and have is be literature.
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